Storyboard improvements
So I just presented the storyboard for my major narative project and I got a few ideas to improve upon it.
- Change the greens/colours of the jungle to help show emotion. Maybe even insert more shadows vs light.
- make first entrance to the jungle more menacing
Scheree your pitch was good despite not feeling 100%. You saw how some of the more animated performers pitched and the feedback they were fed. Your story is clearly structures and presented in your colour script boards. I think it may need some "tightening up" in the introduction and interaction of the two main chracters in the jungle. There are some shots that can be dropped in that scene without affecting the story and allowing you to deliver time to animating other parts. You have chosen shots that demonstrate animation principles but also film making aspects such as depth.
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